This is the original version of the prologue to my first novel, “We Put the ‘Dual’ in ‘Individual.’” I am posting this to showcase how bad my writing was, as compared to how it had progressed as of April 2012, when I rewrote this prologue. “Hey! Be quiet back there!” I was scared to…
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Chapter 1 – Narrator: ??? – Add ‘Em Up and Knock ‘Em Down
This is a rewritten version of the prologue of my first novel, “We Put the ‘Dual’ in ‘Individual.’” “Bet you wish you’d been quiet earlier, don’t ya?” the man said from the front of the van. I couldn’t tell if I sensed sadistic glee or annoyance in his voice, but either way, I didn’t…